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Sleep Patterns shows that a truck driver, full-time mother and doctor don't sleep very well


WasishaSisha 16 / 20  
Oct 30, 2016   #1
The chart below shows the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations according to a Canadian study.

The given table illustrates the scheme of sleep five different occupations according to Canadian study. Overall, truck driver, full-time mother and doctor have a rough pattern of sleep that they still awake have a rough pattern of sleep that they still awake whereas other individuals normally sleep fairly from 10 p.m. until 7 a.m.

A Canadian study reveals that doctor only has five hours sleep a day start from 1 a.m. to 7 a.m. and divided by short awake at 3 a.m. This may be because she or he must face emergencies call. Full-time mothers have a normal eight-hour portion of sleep basically; nevertheless two hours sleep at 1 a.m. until 3 a.m. must change into at 1 a.m. until 3 p.m. It probably they have to be awoken for comforting their babies. Surprisingly, truck drivers have a tough schedule of sleep; they only sleep at 7 a.m. until 10 a.m. and from 4 p.m. to 7 p.m. in a day.

In contrast with other former occupations, students have an ordinary time sleep, it starts 11 p.m. to 7 a.m.; similarly, the business executive begin their rest from 11 p.m. until 5a.m. They have less 2-hour sleep instead of the former job.

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Hujjatul19 45 / 70 3  
Oct 30, 2016   #2
Dear Washisha, I have some suggestions for you

... from 1 a.m. to 7 a.m. and dividedbe interrupted by short awake at 3 a.m.

This may be because she or he must ...
It probably they have to be awoken for ...

Individual opinion as additional information should not be attached

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