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Society represents the different characteristics of human lifestyle



varun1960 2 / 3  
May 23, 2012   #1
Society represents the different characteristics of human lifestyle and their relationship with each other. I believe that studying major cities doesn't make sense in analyzing the important characteristics of a society. Major cities alone can't help in understanding the structure of the society and hardly any clear idea is achieved.

Most of the cities are formed by people of various cultures and different people come from various hamlets and towns, they have different reasons to live there. No static culture is maintained all the time; it keeps on changing with time and the opportunities. Human relationships change day to day life. For instance a person or family who used to live in a village who started life in a city may not be able to spend the time with their relations as if before. Here the human relationships are estimated wrong observing city life.

Whole society can't be estimated or analyzed studying a part of it. Here I come up with another example, people in New York hardly spent their time for having their food and the people in London who belongs to same western part of the world have their food with peace. Here the lifestyle of the western societies can't be understood clearly. No one can get the pristine sense of statement studying the major cities.

Characteristics of the society include lot of things; simple the study of cities that keep on changing and which are dependent on many circumstances can't bring up any particular idea. Definitely one can't get the clear sense of culture and human relations in society by studying a part of the society or the major cities of the society.

EF_Susan - / 2310  
May 24, 2012   #2
Society represents the different characteristics of human lifestyles and their relationship with each other.

Major cities alone can't help us to understand the structure of the society and hardly any clear idea is achieved.

Most of the cities are formed by people of various cultures, and different people come from various hamlets and towns, having different reasons to live there.

No static culture is maintained all the time; it keeps on changing with time and the opportunities.

For instance, a person or family who used to live in a village but started life in a city may not be able to spend as much time with their relations as if before.

Whole societies can't be estimated or analyzed by studying just a part of them .

Here I come up with another example, people in New York hardly spent their time for having their food and the people in London who belongs to same western part of the world have their food with peace.---Do you mean that life is so fast paced that people hardly have time to relax and eat?

Characteristics of a society include lot of things, and the study of cities that keep on changing ...

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OP varun1960 2 / 3  
May 25, 2012   #3
yeah. . i mean saying that people not even spending much time to have food. thanx Susan for pointing out errors .. . but i can't get u clearly all the mistakes u highlighted. if possible please explain. thanx once again for spending time for my essay :)


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