I am planning to take the IELTS test. Here is one of my essay. I really need to improve my writing skills in order to get the best preparation for the IELTS test.
Topic: Fossil fuels such as coal, oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, is encouraged. Is this trend a positive or negative development?
Environment plays an important role in our daily life. Nowadays, our green air in environment is polluted by over using of fossil fuels. So that the trend of replacing fossil fuels by wind and solar power is highly justifiable.
Wind and solar power are both environmentally safe sources of energy. In fact, our earth is endangered by dioxide which is a production of coal and oil from vehicles and industrial. For example, the world temperature is hotter every year and protection air of earth is destroyed by many dangerous rays from universe. Therefore, government should encourage wind and solar power as a alternative sources of energy and impose a tighter law on using coal and oil. If wind and solar power become main energy and coal and oil are used in acceptable way our world will be a better place for humanity to live and develop.
It is undeniable fact that wind and solar power are easy and reasonable way to use energy. For instances, solar power can be used to boil water for bath and cook while wind is very useful to generate electricity. In addition, wind power is suitable to nature and makes country more modern with eco-friendly high technology in fields of energy. Besides, coal and oil are current energy but shows many disadvantages such as pollute the air, harm to consumer, high price, ... In contrast, wind and solar power prove more convenient and easy to be the future energy for humanity.
Put it in the nutshell, alternative energy including wind and solar power should be encouraged all over the world. From my perspective, our earth will be better if people know how to use novel and suitable power for our daily life.
Fossil fuels usage
Topic: Fossil fuels such as coal, oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, is encouraged. Is this trend a positive or negative development?
Environment plays an important role in our daily life. Nowadays, our green air in environment is polluted by over using of fossil fuels. So that the trend of replacing fossil fuels by wind and solar power is highly justifiable.
Wind and solar power are both environmentally safe sources of energy. In fact, our earth is endangered by dioxide which is a production of coal and oil from vehicles and industrial. For example, the world temperature is hotter every year and protection air of earth is destroyed by many dangerous rays from universe. Therefore, government should encourage wind and solar power as a alternative sources of energy and impose a tighter law on using coal and oil. If wind and solar power become main energy and coal and oil are used in acceptable way our world will be a better place for humanity to live and develop.
It is undeniable fact that wind and solar power are easy and reasonable way to use energy. For instances, solar power can be used to boil water for bath and cook while wind is very useful to generate electricity. In addition, wind power is suitable to nature and makes country more modern with eco-friendly high technology in fields of energy. Besides, coal and oil are current energy but shows many disadvantages such as pollute the air, harm to consumer, high price, ... In contrast, wind and solar power prove more convenient and easy to be the future energy for humanity.
Put it in the nutshell, alternative energy including wind and solar power should be encouraged all over the world. From my perspective, our earth will be better if people know how to use novel and suitable power for our daily life.
