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Specified design and proper location of the wind turbines make the electrical system more efficient



thutyedaniel 32 / 28  
May 7, 2015   #1
The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.


The first diagram gives information with regard to the construction of a wind turbine and the second picture shows how the wind turbines work in the optimum locations. At first glance, it is evident that a wind turbine can be constructed by four important components. In sharp contrast, the strategic locations establish the output of electricity. Note, the higher of a wind turbine location is, the bigger of the electricity will be produced.

To begin with, the way of a wind turbine constructed is to complete all the tools which consist of blades, wind sensor, generator, and steel tower. First, when the wind blows the blades, automatically the blades will rotate. At the same time, the wind sensor will operate the speed and direction, and the specific information can be seen in computer which is located beside the steel tower. Then, the generator produces 1.5 megawatts electricity from a wind turbine.

The tower can be placed on the hill, under the sea and near by domestic turbine. The tower on the hill, get maximum wind strength, and it means more electricity can be generated. Afterwards, when a wind turbine is located under the sea, it will result less electricity even this way do not disturb the landscape, Otherwise, wind turbine tends to have less wind strengths by only 100 kilowatts at domestic area than in other locations.


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siddiqumar 15 / 8  
May 7, 2015   #2
To begin with, the way of a wind turbine constructed is to complete all the tools which consist of blades, wind sensor, generator, and steel tower.

To begin with, the way of a wind turbine constructed is to complete all the toolsall of the tools or all tools which consist of blades, wind sensor, generator, and steel tower.

Afterwards, when a wind turbine is located under the sea, it will result less electricity even this way do not disturb the landscape, Otherwise, wind turbine tends to have less wind strengths by only 100 kilowatts at domestic area than in other locations.

Afterwards, when a wind turbine is located under the sea, it will result less electricity even this way do not disturb the landscape, Otherwise , what do you mean? it will be better if you do not use comma in this sentence wind turbine tends to have less wind strengths by only 100 kilowatts at domestic area than in other locations.

thutyedaniel
actually your writing is very good. but let me try to give you some advices. I hope that you can be carefully to use punctuation and an article because this is vital for perfect sentence.


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