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Do store knowledge on the internet outweigh stored knowledge in books?



THANHNGAN241 1 / -  
Aug 6, 2024   #1
In the past, people would like to save knowledge them write in the paper, pieces of animal skin or carvings on cliffs. However, nowadays people will save knowledge on the internet. In my opinion, although they reading is beneficial but I think knowledge on the internet is greater.
Back then, people often note knowledge through mainly books. Although, they is generally available and east to find but their quantity is not enough for information and knowledge. Besides, It is very difficult to preserve these materials because of the influence of the environment. In addition, If we need to find some information, it takes a lot of time and effort to read all those books.
'Currently, the Internet is considered a huge ''encyclopedia'', containing a treasure trove of different information and knowledge.' With just one click, you can collect and use countless resources about the field you are looking for, to serve your learning and working activities. Moreover, thanks to that you can improve your knowledge and learn more new and cool things. Not only gives people an additional means to study, look up and collect information in addition to books, the Internet also makes learning more diverse and interesting with online learning. Thereby shortening the time and distance in accessing knowledge, improving people's skills.
In conclusion, Through the above information, you must have known the benefits of the Internet to bring us.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15451  
Aug 7, 2024   #2
It is unfortunate that you have only written 232 words for this topic. The minimum word count is 250 words for the task 2 essay. The automatic word count deduction, for the lacking number up to 250 will result in a failing preliminary TA score. What does that mean for your overall score then? Well, you are in jeopardy of receiving a failing score overall because you would have failed 50% of the test already by not meeting the word count. It is essential that you always write a minimum of 250 words to avoid the auto failing score. Even if we were to consider the points that could be awarded to you for the other scoring sections, these would not add up to a passing score for you.


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