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'Students are developing more and more interest in arts and literature' - ielts essay



farina 11 / 20  
Feb 21, 2012   #1
THESE DAYS PEOPLE PAY MORE ATTENTION TO ARTISTS (WRITTERS, PAINTERS AND SO ON) AND GIVE LESS IMPORTANCE TO SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY.
TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE AND DISAGREE? WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?"


It is true that in resent years many people are developing more and more interest in arts and literature. At the same time, this attraction could cause many individuals to draw away from much more significant fields like science and technology. While I accept that this trend is increasing but in my opinion this can not stop people to do more researches and produce more technological inventions.

On one hand, rapid proliferation of technology has made human lives very hard and tough. For instance, with the invention of mobile phones, we are now in the approach of our employers all the time. They can call us and hand over office work at any time. Not only that with the advancement of technology people have become much more materialistic and worldly. This race of materialism is putting people under immense pressure and tension. To take a refuge from this tense and depressive world people are taking the support of writers and painters. These artists, with their creativity, take people to an imaginary world, away from their busy lifestyle and help them to calm their tiring nerves.

On the other hand, as we are living in the 21st century, where our lives are completely dependent on science and technology, the predilection for artists can not pull us away from science and technology. No doubt, paintings are very good remedy for a sombre sole, but science provides a real cure which can save lives. In past few years huge number of researches have been done to find the treatment of a lethal disease called cancer. Only science and technology have made its treatment possible. In addition, all the natural resources, which have made our lives easy, are now available to humans because of technology. For these reasons, advancements in these fields, especially in the field of genetic science will never stop

To recapitulate, I concede that the works of artists do have magnetic effects that is drawing attention, yet arts and literature do not solve many problems that the mankind is encountering today. The answers to these problems are given by science and technology and this factor will always attract people towards them.

Zarina - / 1  
Feb 21, 2012   #2
Nowadays , the artists, celebrities, writters are under spot light. However the scientist are not so important in our modern world, like they used to be some years ago. I partly agreee with that. And I am going to share with my opinions.

Firstly, we see all over the papers and watch on tv about popular writers who sold their bestsellers, what these books were all about, and I think it attract people's attention more. Owing to fact, that not everybody is interested in science. For example for young people it is not interesting to watch documentaries, which I think is not good, because it developes us. On the other hand, I feel modern population is more than interested in science and technology also. Because now everything is done by machines, and people are waiting for something new to appear. For example there are so many watchers of BBC news channel's programme "click". every time there is a broadcast of some new inventions, they show which company had produced a new gadget and their advantages and disadvantages. I think issue related to science is also concerning people's minds. For instance , everybody tries to get to know some piece of information about space exploration now.

In conclusion I want to say that technologies and artists had and will always have a balanced attention, it just depends on personalities of people.
Athena - / 82  
Feb 21, 2012   #3
Hi Farina,

I just edited a couple of things:


It is true that in resentrecent years many people are developing more and more interest in arts and literature.

... sombresombersolesoul , but science provides....

Hope this helps. Good Luck! =)
OP farina 11 / 20  
Feb 22, 2012   #4
Thanks for your corrections. I have checked the dictionary somber and sombre words have the same meaning so they are both correct


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