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Some students want to learn additional subjects. Others think should focus on getting a degree.

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Sep 21, 2023   #1

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects.

Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

It is often argued that students should assimilate additional subjects to become all-rounders while others disagree and think that spending all their energy obtaining a diploma is much more vital. Although focusing on formal qualifications has its own benefits, I believe that students should gain knowledge from both tertiary education and other sources.

On one hand, it is essential to devote all effort to achieving a good degree as academic performance is the main criterion of success for university students. If students do not concentrate utterly on their curriculum, they will have the tendency to fall behind in their studies and struggle to catch up. For instance, a friend of mine used to be a top student, yet she had played truant several times for her critical reasoning course. As a result, she was one of the students whose marks ranked at the bottom of the class and she took approximately six months to back to her old self again.

On the other hand, having a well-rounded education can open the door to better career prospects. Learning additional subjects can help students cultivate their soft skills which are the important requirements set by big corporations. Moreover, in surveys conducted by prestige organizations every year, an ideal employee is one who has good theoretical knowledge as well as related skills. An outstanding example of this would be Google will not hire employees who do not have information technology knowledge at an advanced level and problem-solving skills that can reach its benchmark.

In conclusion, although paying attention to the curriculum at the university is necessary, students need to train themselves through additional subjects. They should anticipate their soft skills for a much better career path.
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Oct 7, 2023   #2
The essay is over written. You cannot complete 288 words within 40 minutes. The actual test does not allow you to complete that many words because you have to self time yourself when writing the 2 essays, which have a 20 and 40 minute writing deadline respectively. If you write this many words in the actual test, you are not going to finish developing your reasoning. The result of which will be an open ended essay that will receive an automatic failing score. Learn to write shorter essays. Use a timer whenever you practice to ensure you properly divide the 1 hour writing time between the 2 essays. It would be better if you write a shorter essay for me to review and advice you on. This length is incorrect so any advice I give you will be inaccurate.

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