Success: Hard Work Or Luck

These days everyone what to be successful. There are a lot of people, who get succes in the world. You are looking at them and think how they get their big time. What is more, everyone has their own success . So what do we need to get a success?

First of all,it is worth considering that it depends only on one factor. Our education, environment, and approach to life affect our luck.
For example, you want to win a competition. Not only luck, but also our knowledge is important for result.
Knowledge is what we are studying during our whole lives. You must prepare for taking part at competitions. You can learn part of information and hope for luck or learn all of the information and be sure for success. Both ways can lead you to success or fail. Personally speaking I will choosing the second.

Secondly our success is due to support and advice from friends and mentors, it depended on us to keep trying after we had failed. Success mainly depends on hard work. Inspiration is one thing and you can't control it, but if you have inspiration your work can be easier.

From my point of view hard work is more important in the way to success.
All things considered both factor influence on how success you are.
We must have balance between this things to get ahead.

Rather than reviewing this as a task 2 essay, I will review it as an English grammar practice essay instead. Why am I going to do it that way? Well, first of all, the essay does not meet the 250 minimum word requirement for a valid presentation. You only wrote 232 words, which means this would be an automatically failing essay. The number of word deductions percentage would be so huge that you would start your essay on a failing preliminary Task Accuracy score.

Your restatement and writer's opinion ended with a rhetorical question. That is definitely not the way to present the summary paragraph. You created a prompt deviation by writing in that manner. You should never close the first paragraph with a question. It simply alters the way the original way the prompt was provided for your writing instructions.