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When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.


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Mar 22, 2014   #1
I certainly agree with the fact ,success follows hard work.Hence, without hard work , it s not possible to achieve higher levels in life. Hard work and luck cannot be related with each other. Wise people would prefer to work hard to achieve their goals.

The market is highly competitive. Students needs dedication and determination in order to get into the career they like to. Studying hard ,in a systematic manner helps them to achieve their goals. Business man, have to thrive hard to get their company in high standards.Depending upon luck would never lead to success, it is a mere act of foolishness.Working hard would help every individual to cherish the blossom of success.

There is is a saying - "No pain, no gain". My dad was a good example for this statement.He was a businessman. He starting his company on a small scale business, now the success is unimaginable. Of course, it took 25 years to get the flavors of success, but definitely it is worth for him and his family.

Not only my dad, many highly ranked sportsman,musician, politician and many more people , are there in that place , is because of the hard work. So working hard will never let you down.

Although, some have a feeling luck will favor them in the last minute. But i would recommend not to rely on luck. Work hard and enjoy the benefits of success.

SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
Mar 23, 2014   #2
Maybe this is more convenience for reader impression

Therefore I suggest you to add what kind of Essay that you made IELTS, Toefl or others. It makes reader easier to identified in order to give appropriate advices.
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Mar 23, 2014   #3
Your body paras need specific examples to support your reasoning.


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