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SUMMARS TEDx HOW TO LEARN AN LANGUAGE IN SIX MONTH



BAMS14 18 / 21  
Sep 29, 2016   #1
HOW TO LEARN AN LANGUAGE IN SIX MONTH

Speaker at TED talked about learn the second language they said this is hard to several people. Many methods in the world to study foreign languages. That is about psychology, effort and industry. How to can normal learn second language quickly and efectively? It is big question everyone who want learn other language. According to the speaker everybody can belonging stranger language only six month, the progress about spending more time to focus. To illustrates heavy stuff doesnt fly, a plane cannot flight if more load but cars can fly with technology and they do not have big loads. This is Same logical to human, they are need strategy, organizing material and feel happy to study.

To make efectively learn speaker gave five principle those are:
1 .Focus on Languages, the problem of several people is not focus at one languages, they are always use first language every days. Focusing to one language during six month it will make easy learner.

2 Tools of learner, in this case is practice and adaptaion, learner should practice the new languages every time, every days, and every moment and adaptation whit it.

3. Understanding the mesage first. Understanding is crucial point to learner, understanding can do with body languages, observe or listening.

4. Language is not about knowledge but psicological training.It Is not about knowledge which must spend more time to reading science book, observation, writing an article but it is about training, so learner should more exercise speaking, listening and adaptation.

5. Make it happy,do not frustation and stress, make the process study to happy and fun.

Not only above but also there are seven rapid action to get new languages, those are:
1. Listen Alot
2. Get the meaning first, body language
3.Use patern already know, start mixing
4. Focus in the core
5.Glue words complex meaning,
6. Get language parent
7. Direct to conect to mental image
All in all, people can learn more language in six month with those strategy, to require more exercise, strive, and spend more time learn.

erwiin1 9 / 14  
Sep 29, 2016   #2
Hi, BAMS14

I would give you corrections for your essay

1. Speaker at TED talked about (about to ) learn the second language they ...
2. That is about psychology, effort (effort, ) and industry
3. How to can normal (normally ) learn
4. second (the second ) language
5. quickly and efectively (effectivelly )?
6. It is big (big to ) question everyone
7. who want (wants ) learn
8. other language (another language )
9. According to the speaker (speaker, )
10. everybody can belonging (belong ) stranger language
11. only six month (months ), the progress about ...
12. To illustrates heavy stuff doesnt (does not ) fly, a plane cannot flight ...
13. This is Same logical to human, they are need (need ) strategy, organizing ...

Thank you
Dioba 68 / 97  
Sep 29, 2016   #3
After reading your summary,i have some advice,perhaps useful for you.Keep writing!
1. ... talked about learn the second language. they said this is hard ...-----> you must put dot after "language" to make this sentence clearly.

2. wrong spelling words.
efectively -----> effectively
only six month ------> months
strategy- ----> strategies
doesnt -----> does not
patern -----> pattern
psicological -----> psychological
3. According to the speaker everybody can belonging stranger language only six month, the progress ...------> remember, put dot after "speaker" to make the sentence clearly


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