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Abrahamlincoln 54 / 50  
Oct 31, 2016   #1
DID CHINA DISCOVER AMERICA

The majority people argue that a Chinese Muslim, Zheng discovered America more than 70 years before Columbus. It is supported by the map, entitled "General chart of the integrated world" after he did seven voyages for 30 years. The map was bought from a local dealer by a Shanghai lawyer, Liu Gang. He argues it proves that Zheng traveled to the Americas, Australia, and the Mediterranean as well.

The map contains detailed elements. It shows the two hemispheres of the world by both south and the north pole. America is described clearly, even the rivers are running from far inland is recognizable. However, it cannot prove anything since only Europeans dramatized the world this way. European travelers finished discovery like this over hundred of years, while Zheng only explored for 30 years. A lecturer of the University of British Columbia, Professor Timothy Brook stated that this map is absolute nonsense. He argues the map copied onto a European map.

ichanpants89 16 / 742  
Oct 31, 2016   #2
Hi Lincoln,
Here's my remarks towards your article summary.

- The majority peopleMost people argue that (...) than 70 years before Columbus did .
- The map was bought from a local dealer by a Shanghai lawyer, Liu Gang who was also a local dealer .
- He argues it provesargued that it was the proof that Zheng traveled to the AmericasAmerica , Australia...

- ... hemispheres of the world byi.e. both south and ...
- However, it cannot prove anything since only Europeans dramatized the world this way.(It is a confusing sentence, perhaps you can simplify this one)
- European travelers finished theirdiscoverydiscoverieslike this over hundred of years, whilebut Zheng only explored forneeds 30 years to explore .
- He arguesargued that the map was copied fromonto a European map.

Hope this helps :)
septiadara29 48 / 45  
Nov 1, 2016   #3
Hello! I will give you some opinions about your summary.

I suggest that you have to use past tense in your summary, because you still use simple present time

(1) The majorityMost people argue ...
(2) It iswas supported by (...) world", after he did ...
(3) He arguesargued that it proveswas a proof that Zheng traveled to the Americas , Australia, and the ...
(4) The map containscontained some detailed elements.
(5) It showsshowed the two hemispheres ...
(6) America iswas described clearly, even the riversarewere running from far inland iswas recognizable.
(7) However, it cannotcould not prove anything since only Europeans dramatizedwho exaggerate the world this way.
(8) European travelers finished their discovery like this over hundred ...
akbarmappiare 31 / 445  
Nov 1, 2016   #4
Hi Lincoln.
these are a few improvements for your summary.
GOOD LUCK

The majority OF people argue (...) before Columbus FOUND IT. It is supported by the map, entitled "General chart of the integrated world" after he did CONDUCTED seven voyages for 30 years.

... by a Shanghai lawyer, NAMELY Liu Gang. He argues D it proves that Zheng ...

... of the world by WITH both south and ...
European travelers finished THE discovery like ...
He argues D the map IS copied onto a European map.


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