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Summary Folktayes from Dutch : The cat and the cradle


This is a folktale from Dutch which tells about a culture in the acient era and people in the past time. There are some customs which actually in this era is really to be avoided by people because of agains rules or even law. Not be able to be evaded that a lot of changing in the world have established new culture and customs in every nation. This is happened to Deutch.

In the long years ago, Dutch lived by a lot of customs which had to be accepted by all people. One of these customs was following grandmother in every family as an older girl person in home. Every wife who just married had to live in the husband home and obey by all rules which exist in that home. Beside of that, there was a unnormal tradition to mother a baby who just born. Because a baby would be hoped born in a man gender. The grandmother would be angry if she wanted a man baby , but her son-in-law gave birth a woman gender. Because of some people hopping for a man sex, many girl babies were abandoned without cared.

One day there were a moment when the a cat protected a girl baby who did not be hopped by a grandmother in a family, but the cat successed to make her father keeping her in a secret place. Therefore the baby girl growthed up and became kind young girl. Although her family did not want to receive this girl. The girl and cat became bestfriend and died in the same time. Because of the kind hearth of girl, many people in this present time always recall their memory about this story.

Hi
good essay
just couple of points
is really to be avoided
because of agains rules or even law=> ???

By reading your essay I understand that you have some beautiful and complex points that you want to present
I strongly suggest you to study more sample (as I am doing the same) to expand your vocabulary and learn to use them in your essays in a proper way

Best wishes
Firman, you have a good essay there. I appreciate your effort in delivering your ideas in delivering the ideas in both simple and complex sentence. Still, there are several things you need to be considered as I mentioned as follows:

- This is a folktale from Dutch which tells about a culture in the acientancient era and people in the past time.
- There are some customs which actually in this era is really to must be avoided by people in this era because of againsagainst rules or even law.

- Beside of that, there was a unnormal tradition to a mother and a baby who just born.
- One day there werewas a moment when the a cat protected a girl baby....
- Although her family did not want to receive thisaccept the girl.

Hope this helps!
Hello Firman,

... which tells about a culture in the acientancient era and people ...

This is happened to by Deutch.

In the long years ago,long time ago, Dutch lived by a lot of customs which it had to be accepted by all people.

Every wife who just married had to live [must be to infinitive, to life ] in the husband home ...

Beside of that, while there was a unnormal ...

One day there they were a moment (...), but the cat successedsucceed to make her father ...

hope these help


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