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Article Summary - Google Introduces the Pixel, Its Own Smartphone



Abrahamlincoln 54 / 50  
Oct 7, 2016   #1
Google Introduces the Pixel, Its Own Smartphone

Google has published its smartphone manufactured by some companies such as Samsung, LG Electronics, and Lenovo. Google's new strategy of controlling both hardware and software for its devices. The Google's CEO, Sundar Pichai remarked that this projected executed to provide computers can understand what people are saying and responds conversationally with the right information at the right moment. It aims to build a personal Google for each and every individual. It named Pixel as the first smartphone with the Google Assistant built into the device. It was a component of new-product barrage including a Wi-Fi router, a virtual reality headset and a Chromescast device for streaming high-resolution video. It would be a prospective competitor for Apple and Android smartphone.

Bams17 28 / 38  
Oct 7, 2016   #2
Google Introduces the Pixel, Its Own Smartphone

Google has BEEN published its smartphone ...

It namedCALLED Pixel as the first ...

1. REMEMBER AND PAY ATTENTION TO USE THE PAST TENSE
2. BE CAREFULL WITH NEGATIVE SENTENCES (S + TO BE + V3)
NICE SUMMARY BUT THE LITTLE OF FALSE MAKE RUINS YOUR SUMMARY.
GOOD JOB!
Mathew8 5 / 11  
Oct 7, 2016   #3
Hello Abrahamlincon
I have a twice of advice to you

The Google's CEO, Sundar Pichai remarked that this projectedexecuted
.......there are two verbs in your sentence
.......projected= verb
.......executed= verb
.......you have to eliminate one of them


to provide (article) computers can understand what ...
......i think you need an article before noun
justivy03 - / 2265  
Oct 7, 2016   #4
Hi Lincoln, below are my thoughts on your article summary.

- Google'sThis is google's new strategy of
- that this projectedis executed to provide
- computers that can understand
- what people are saying and responds conversationally
- It is named Pixel asand is the
- It would be a prospective competitor for

There you have it Lincoln, so far, this is the most straight forward article summary that I have read from you and I can see that you made a lot of progress and I hope this will keep on increasing and develop your technique in writing, not only that, this means that you definitely understand what you are reading, this will help you gain a better understanding on a more complex prompt and you will also see your progress and thats a very rewarding feeling, well at least that's for me, I hope it's for you too. Keep up the good work.


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