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TED Summary: HOW TO GROW A FOREST IN YOUR BACKYARD



Abu_Gosok 2 / 3  
Sep 22, 2016   #1
Eco-entrepreneur, Shubhendu Sharma talk on TED with an appealing topic trying to share his experience on making forests professionally in just 10 years. He was an industrial engineer before he decides to work with nature. His first experience working with nature is when he made a forest in his backyard house. He has a view that forests do not have to be spacious nature reserves and outlying from our lives. Yet, forests can become part of our lives right where we are even in town. To make it become true, you can start it from the soil. You can perform an analysis of the soil and seek for the deficiency which may inhibit the seedling to grow and do something to make it better or to keep the soil moist. Aside from the soil, other elements are needed as well as water, sunlight and nutrition to grow the native trees of the place; and divide them into shrub layer, sub-tree layer, tree layer and canopy layer. When the trees begin to grow, make sure to take care of them by watering and removing the weeds on the ground for at least 2 years. For the rest let the nature works.

cinta_dollar51 - / 4  
Sep 22, 2016   #2
hello @Abu_Gosok

could i give you little bit suggestions
here we go

1. "Shubhendu Sharma TALKS on TED with an appealing" because --> when S (he, she, it ) meet Verb must put S

2. "He was an industrial engineer before DECIDING" because ---> after before you must put noun. change he decides BECOMES deciding


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