Many peoples think that when people became adult their brain did not produce any cells again. But Sandrine Thuret, a neuroscientist stated that adult brain can generate new nerve cells. The part of human brain named hippocampus are responsible for learning, memory, mood and emotion. Hippocampus produces 700 new neurones per day. And then, while a human became 50 years old, all their neurone cells are exchanged with the hippocampus.
Otherwise, specific activity and behavior will increase neurogenesis or instead decreased it. Activities like study, sleep, and running will increase neurogenesis. On the contrary, activities like drink alcohol, stress, and getting old will decrease neurogenesis. And then what kind of food we eat also have contribution to increase neurogenesis or decreased it. Food like blueberries, dark chocolate, and salmon are contribute to increasing neurogenesis. Conversely, food with high fat, and ethanol will decrease neurogenesis.
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Many peoples think that when ...
people was being plural noun, you should not use "s"
And then, while a human became 50 ...
conjuction and only use for connect equal things, you can use another cunjunction.
Activities like study, sleep, and running will increase neurogenesis.
you can replace "like" to be "such as"
you should replace will to be "can/could"
Food like blueberries, dark chocolate, and salmon are contribute...
note: keep writing and go ahead.
