Summary TED - nine life lessons from rock climbing

Matthew Childs is a professional climber, has been climbing two dozens of years. Based on his experience, he reveals there are 9 values which could be implemented in our life. 1) Fear is a mistake. People who travel on the mountain are required to ensure every single step they pass is completed and help them to reach the finish line. If we are afraid or doubt to take a step, it means finished, we will fall into the ravine and disappear. Focusing on your little step will help you to attain your goal and target. 2) Design your comfortable place to take a nap. It cannot be disputed that life is unfair. Most people become disappointed and hopeless, they are not ready to confront difficulties and be ready in their delicate situation. Therefore, the ability to find the positive side of your life is an essential skill which should be developed. Its aim is to have a positive mind in every condition

Dear Lincoln, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too!

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hello lincoln
I have some suggestions for you
hope it works

1. I think you should put the source in the end of this summary
2. I prefer to choose words than number for opening sentences
3. If the number below twenty, you can put it into a word

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thanks