Summary out of an article: Sports help heal in the darkest of times

The bombing attack which happened in Boston Marathon in 2013 has changed people's thought toward that annual race. The grief and the hatred are something have in common among people throughout the world, particularly people of Boston when they know for first time about that heinous attack. However, those feeling can be recovered by recalling the true meaning of sport itself. The sport are part of American tradition and it has been helping out people to create tough character and shape the value of togetherness. The aftermath of that attack will forever be remembered and always be linked to Boston as a single part yet, the healing actually does exist within this tragedy.

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The bombing attack RAID which happened in Boston Marathon ...
The grief and the hatred are something have HAD in common among people ...
the WHOLE world / THE first time / THE heinous attack.
The sport are IS A part of American tradition and it has been helping out people to create A tough character ...
The aftermath of that THEREFORE, THE attack will forever be remembered FOREVER and always (...) single part, BUT the healing actually does ...

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