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Article Summary : The Sweet scent of plastic lures seabirds to a dangerous snack



nda18 46 / 60  
Nov 10, 2016   #1
Recently, the plastic pollution fouls oceans across the globe. There are more than 5 trillion pieces of plastic swirling in the sea and make the fish poisoned dead. The marine creatures sometimes mistake garbage for their natural food. Plastic resembles a drifting jellyfish to marine creatures. Some seabirds are attracted to a particular stinky sulphur compound since they seek out krill to eat. Savoca and his colleagues wondered if small plastic left in the ocean, it might become covered with sulphur that are produced by algae. He proved it when he put some plastic and left them until three weeks. The result is the plastics are covered with sulphur compound let them has the same scent as the krill. This lead seabirds which seek out the food using their smelling skill to eat trash instead of krill.

Source : newscientist.com/article/2112231-the-sweet-scent-of-plastic-lures-seabirds-to-a-dangerous-snack/

akbarmappiare 31 / 445  
Nov 10, 2016   #2
Hi Nurul.
these are my thoughts towards your summary


THIS IS A SUMMARY EXTRACTED FROM AN ARTICLE ON NEWSCIENTIST'S WEBSITE(You should provided the introduction sentence before you reviewed contents in the article) .

... swirling in the sea and make CAUSE the fishES poisoned dead DEATH. The marine creatures ...
THE Plastic resembles a drifting jellyfish to THE marine creatures.
Savoca(Who is this.? You should explain her.) and his colleagues (...) left in the ocean,.(make you sure that there needs a comma or period) it might become covered with sulphur that are(you should omit this) produced by algae.

... he put some plasticS and left them ...
... compound let them has HAVE the same ...
... seek out the food using HARNESS their smelling skill ...


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