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Summary of TIME The USA Election News about Last Presidential Debate



alfa7 19 / 22  
Oct 27, 2016   #1
This year is an election year in The United Stated of America. Two of the major party, Republic and Democrat, released their candidate to obtain position as president of that super-power federal state. There are Hilary Clinton from democrat side and Donald Trump as Republican side. The USA is a liberal country with regulation about freedom of speak; accordingly, making this election with campaign calendar was so high tension. The last presidential debate slated to from October 19th 2016 in The USA time area makes Clinton so enough with word-attacks from Trump. Clinton's deleted mails is one of the ingredients of Trump's speak in debate; he, moreover, urges Clinton about what really the mails about. In before, Clinton delates myriad mails on her mail box and array of them had laid out by Wikileaks. Furthermore, Clinton claimed about new federal intelligence repot and she added Russia as culprit of this cyber-crime. In same time, Clinton pressed Trump to lay out his tax report; there is indication about Trump has a illegal will to hide his tax report.

Abrahamlincoln 54 / 50  
Oct 27, 2016   #2
Hello Brother
This is my advice towards your first sentence.

Two of the major party, (you need plural word and verb to have perfect sentence) Republic and Democrat, (...) Donald Trump as (from) Republican side. (You need other sentence to explain your previous explanation before you go to next topic) .

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