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Such a surprised day! Yesterday's weather was hard. It was changeable.


StwhWindresides 3 / 7 1  
Apr 11, 2014   #1
Yesterday's weather was hard. It was changeable. In the morning, the weather was really horrible. The sun was not shining. Rain felt heavily without warming. The humidity was too high. It went up to 85 percent. Everything got dirty easily. The floor was wet. Down the streets, people moved carefully because the streets were quite slippery. All of above things warmed a grey Thursday. Anyway, I had to go to work as usual. When I arrived my office, a joyful news was informed to me that tomorrow, we are going to have a day off. It helped me forget totally about the bad weather. In the afternoon, the weather was pretty pleasant with light winds. There was no raining at all and it was getting brighter. At night, it rained for about 2 hours. I laid down in my bed, listened to sound of falling rain, watched some movies and discovered some new things on the internet. It became a delightful day to me.

dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Apr 12, 2014   #2
What is the purpose of writing this essay? Is this for keeping journal records? You should tell us the purpose so that we would have a better understanding about what your objective is.

All of above things warmed a grey Thursday.

All these features added to a grey and dull Thursday.

When I arrived my office, a joyful news was informed to me that tomorrow, we are going to have a day off.

When I arrived office, I was informed with such a pleasant news that tomorrow is going to be a day off for us.
OP StwhWindresides 3 / 7 1  
Apr 12, 2014   #3
Thank you so much. Actually, this is a record about my daily life. Thanks for correcting my mistakes turn right. Dear :)


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