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The graph gives information about radio and television audiences in the UK during a day in 1992.
As can be seen on the graph, television was obviously more popular than radio in the evening while radio was more popular in the morning. In general, more people watched TV than radio, since the percentage of audience that TV received were nearly twice the figure for radio.
To be more specific, the percentage of people listening to radio reached a peak at 8 am when almost 30 % of British turned on their radio, in the meantime, TV only had less than 10 % of audience. In contrast to radio, more people liked to watch TV in the evening, especially at 8 pm when nearly 45 % of British enjoyed various TV shows, whereas only close to 7 % of people listened to radio.
Besides 8 in the morning and in the evening when radio and TV received the most audience respectively, we can also observe another peak at 2 pm when around 15 % of audience spent their time on both media.
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The graph gives information about radio and television audiences in the UK during a day in 1992.
As can be seen on the graph, television was obviously more popular than radio in the evening while radio was more popular in the morning. In general, more people watched TV than radio, since the percentage of audience that TV received were nearly twice the figure for radio.
To be more specific, the percentage of people listening to radio reached a peak at 8 am when almost 30 % of British turned on their radio, in the meantime, TV only had less than 10 % of audience. In contrast to radio, more people liked to watch TV in the evening, especially at 8 pm when nearly 45 % of British enjoyed various TV shows, whereas only close to 7 % of people listened to radio.
Besides 8 in the morning and in the evening when radio and TV received the most audience respectively, we can also observe another peak at 2 pm when around 15 % of audience spent their time on both media.
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