Unanswered [3] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback   % width Posts: 8

radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.


Eva Novita Sari 47 / 71 2  
Apr 23, 2014   #1
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
================================================================= ========================================

Answer:
The graph gives information about audience in UK who is interested toward radio and television throughout the day in 1992.

Generally, there are explained how percentage of UK population like radio and television from October- December 1992.

Firstly, in 1992, people in UK was interested hearing radio approximately 3 percentage of over 4-years old at 1 o'clock, and it climbed ever higher to almost 25 % at 8.00 o'clock. However, it began to fall to be just above 23 % at 9.00 o'clock which fell steadily until at 13.00 o'clock. Then, it began to fall sharply at 15.00 o'clock among 10 %, and this graph undergone fluctuating until middle night which many persons undergone decreasing sharply to hear radio.

Secondly, some people were interested watching television approximately 13 % at 1.00 o'clock, and it fell slightly at 2.00 o'clock. However, this data increased steadily until 8.00 o'clock that undergone fluctuation respective. Then, it increased sharply at 18.00 o'clock approximately 43 % that fell sharply at 23.00 o'clock.

To sum up, some people was more interested watching television than radio at 18.00 o'clock - 21.00 o'clock that undergone to fall sharply at the time.





upinipin 32 / 49 1  
Apr 23, 2014   #2
and this graph undergone fluctuating until middle night which many persons undergone decreasing sharply to hear radio.
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Apr 23, 2014   #3
The graph givesprovides information about audience inUK audiences forwho is interested toward radio and television throughout the day induring the October to December 1992.

Generally, there are explained how percentage of UK population like radio and television from October- December 1992.

Overall, the peak hours for radio have occurred before noon while the audience for the radio had dropped in its numbers in the evening. However, the audience for TV had been highest during evening hours .
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Apr 27, 2014   #4
Hey there... I see all your writing presented consists of a five paragraph essay. And to tell you the truth, this is not too good because the improvement on vocabulary sentence structure, tone, etc. as to build coherence and cohesion is closely loosed . Although many sample writings for the five ones coming from some corners of the world are confidently shown, this seems more likely to make beginner students hard to polish their sentence structure. Focus on the time given, not the lengthy report.

Have this link if you really really really need to earn a good score:

To sum up, some people was more interested watching television than radio at 18.00 o'clock - 21.00 o'clock that undergone to fall sharply at the time.

An overview, not conclusion. Have this link if you really really really need to earn a good score: ielts-simon.com/ielts-help-and-english-pr/2014/03/ielts-writing-t ask-1-overview-not-conclusion
SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
Apr 27, 2014   #5
Hello Friend :DD

3 percentage

As far as my understanding. percentage commonly writes with a word while percent writes with number
I just read my lesson book. Here the example may be related
The percentage of visitor from Australia is the highest, at 40 percent.

hopefully help you :D
fikri 5 / 317 71  
Apr 27, 2014   #6
Eva, pay more attention to your grammar, you have good ability to compose your report, but sometimes you make mistakes in grammar
tiaDS 73 / 235 52  
Apr 27, 2014   #7
Firstly,

Secondly,

Perhaps you can replace with;
- Turning to the data...
- Moving onto...
- A more detailed look at the bar chart informs that...

Generally, there are explained how percentage of UK population like radio and television from October- December 1992.

To sum up, some people was more interested watching television than radio at 18.00 o'clock - 21.00 o'clock that undergone to fall sharply at the time.

If you have overview you can omit the conclusion.
upinipin 32 / 49 1  
Apr 29, 2014   #8
The graph gives information about audience in UK who is interested toward radio and television throughout the day in 1992.


Home / Writing Feedback / radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.