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The talent show is one of shows that get many enthusiasm of spectators.


hirani03 36 / 50 5  
Aug 18, 2016   #1
Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.
Are these shows a good method finding talented people, or are they just entertainment?
Give the reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience!


Television programs in this day become more varied. However, talent show is one of shows that get many enthusiasm of spectator. Most of them are just entertainment, but in my view, talent shows has most influenced by the ability of contestant.

Television attraction must know the way they treat the viewers. It should be gratifying performance. The TV program has to interest, so that the spectators enjoy the exhibition. The concert which is pleasurable will adhere viewer to wait the next show.

However, finding brilliant people to perform in the TV contest are essential too. The programs cannot be perfect and be impression event when the contestants are not capable. Singing competition, for example, must be full of gifted participant. The spectacular voice is indispensable. So the spectator will be mesmerized. TV contest will be waited by the onlookers until the end of the program. The curious feeling about the winner contest is the reason.

In other hands, not only entertain event with full of blessed performances is determiner of the successful programs but also the present time of show is taking effect. The television talented program must concern to know the best time of viewer to enjoy the show. The perfect time of showing will influence the rating of TV channel where the program published.

In conclusion, I think television show; especially about the talented contest is affected by three ways. Those are entertainment, full of gifted contestants and the present time of the musical competition. However, the satisfaction of the viewer must be priority of the TV organizer. The program will be booming and become trending topic on internet and YouTube over the world.

ekalamarsyari11 72 / 108 9  
Aug 18, 2016   #2
hi hikmah

get manymuch enthusiasm

Television attraction must know the way they treat the viewers
television attractions should know how to treat

... to perform in the TV contest areis also essential too

not only entertainment event with full of blessed performances isdeterminer determine of the ...
sorry hikmah, it is hard to find verb in this sentence
and i think talking about time is not approiate with this topic.
RAY93 35 / 186 136  
Aug 20, 2016   #3
Television programs in this day have become more varied.
... but in my view, talent shows has most influenced by the ability of contestant.

based on the question, you should write that this show is ''a good method finding talented people'' as the objection of what you said before ''are just entertainment''. scrutiny the question so that you can write a powerful essay as the answer which fully fulfill the task response

you should write whether talent show is just only for entertainment or it is a good way for hiring ordinary people which have natural talent to shot their fame

... know the way they to treat the viewers. It should be a gratifying performance. The TV program has to interest,have to be interesting so that the spectators will enjoy the exhibition.

... adhere viewer to wait for the next show.

attempt to compose a complex sentence rather than simple ones

... perform in the TV contest areis[subject+verb agreement issue] essential too.
... be perfect and be impressionan impressive event when the ...
Singing competition, for example, must be full of gifted participant. The spectacular voice is indispensable. So the spectator will be mesmerized.three super simple sentences TV contest will be waitedare going to be wait by the onlookers until the end of the programit[try to use pronoun] . The curious feeling about the winner of the contest is the reason.

In other hands , not only entertainment event with full of blessed performances is determinerwhich determineof the successful of programs but also the present time of show is taking effect. The television talented program?? must concern to know the best timeof airing so that the viewertowill enjoy the show.

In conclusion, I think television show; especially about the talented contest ...[the question is not what affects talent show]


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