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[IELTS] Technology helps student learn more information and learn more quickly?


Jun 9, 2014   #1
Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays, technology plays an indispensable role in almost all spheres of life. In education, it is believed that technology help the students improve their scholastic performances. From my viewpoint, the richness as well as convenience of technology are two main factors that contribute to the students' progress.

To start with, since technology was introduced, student have been exposed to a wide range of information, which neccessarily broaden their minds. The internet, for example, provide knowledge in the form of news, radio talks, tapes or reseachs on any particular fields. There, the students can not only ascertain concerned subjects but they can also get access to relevant issues and discuss with people worldwide.

Another point that students may benefit from technology is the shortened time for learning. The modern world provides learners with the mp3, the mobile phone or the laptop that help them, especially language learners, listen to recordings everywhre or read documents anytime. Therefore, students will develop their skills at a greater pace. Moreover, the internet again, is an inexhaustible resource of visual aids, such as educational games, sounds or images with which students may absorb abstract concepts taught at school more briskly and thoroughly.

On balance, I have to consent to the use of technology in education, as it expedites data availability and accelarates students' learning process. It is highly recommended that apart from education, technology should be applied in every aspect of life which assures of a better future.

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Jun 10, 2014   #2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Technology plays an essential role in human's life. Schoolchildren use technology for getting information and reference to their study. Internet is the sophisticated technology which improves the students scholastic performance.While I agree that this tool sets a good influence for pupils, I believe that technology has been a negative effect.

Hello salmon, I just try to restatement the prompt and my introduction tends to be a balance view between agree and disagree.
Jun 10, 2014   #3
Hello salmon, I just try to restatement the prompt and my introduction tends to be a balance view between agree and disagree.

Hello tiaDS :) In a thread not long ago, a member told me if the examiner was strict, then my essay would be penalized. He said that for the type "Agree or disagree", I should side only one, and support my choice. And now you are stating the opposite?? I don't quite get it :)
Jun 10, 2014   #4
could you visit in ielts-simon.com?
and read this ielts.org/PDF/UOBDs_WritingT2.pdf (task responses)
the last read IELTS on Track book; page 128.
Jul 2, 2014   #7
In education, it is believed that technology helpsthe students improve their scholastic performances.
From my viewpoint, the richness as well as convenience of technology are two main factors that contributes to the students' progress in a large way.

To start with, since technology was introduced, students have been exposed to a wide range of information, which neccessarily broaden their minds.


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