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TEDxWoman Summary: Warrior's Cry Against Child Marriage



alfa7 19 / 22  
Sep 20, 2016   #1
When gender equality is questionable thing in Malawi, there is a girl who named Memory Banda who rises her spirit and try to against early marriage. Due to her enthusiasm, she creates Warrior's Cry for the hope that community protect Malawian girl and child from early marriage. In respect that her effort, early marriage issue in Malawi being global interest and obtain lot of world's eyes to solve that problem.

She was talk in TEDxWomen as most anticipated speaker. She started her speech with read some poem form Malawian girl, with "I Marry When I Want" as the title. She touched every single audience and talking about her sister, who was gain pregnant when she was 11. On the ground that experiences were make her angry and want to create a brand new life in around Malawi by against array data statistic number of early marriage. She imagined in the future, Malawian women have well education and grow up before marriage.

Warrior's Cry is the first community in Malawi declare a campaign to against early marriage. Banda, realize how difficult it is, but is not impossible to happen. She does not have great technology to helps her community, she only has a small phone and she try to find many numbers of Malawian Girls and call them to teach them about negative effect of early marriage. Whereas The Warrior's Cry and Banda's Struggle, now in around Malawi, 18 years old is a legal number to marriage from 15 years old before. Her struggle is kind of how SDGs will happen when we want to tackle to contribute in it.

PHA2016 39 / 38  
Sep 20, 2016   #2
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