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TEXT Messages - novelty for us



Lobocor 1 / 1  
Jul 14, 2014   #1
Ever since the arrival of modern texting, the human communication became easier than formerly. More and more the time has been priority for new technologies such as in the begin with email, generally waited two days to receive an answer, but today the messages are instant.

Although many people condemn texting nowadays, it brought many benefits for us such as possibility to improve skills over writing. To people that want improve their English, like exchange students, texting can be a good way to learn rules from native language.

Nowadays, the language used on texting has creating a polemic about the brake of the correct language. The majority of these people do not know that this way to communicate is too old and has been used since many years ago. One example is IOU that means "I owe you", this expression is used since 1618. If you writing using these expressions when you are talking with your friends by texting, it does not mean that you will write in the same way on an important essay from your college or in a resume for a new job.

Ever more technology is bringing novelty for us in different ways, since new products like smartphones until new forms of thinking. We should keep us open to these novelties and enjoy because more and more technology runs hand in hand with our life.

dumi 1 / 6793  
Jul 14, 2014   #2
Well, it is not clear about the purpose of writing this essay. Are you preparing for IELTS or TOEFL? It is good to include the purpose in your title itself and it helps you attract others to provide you comments. Also, they would provide you with more task related comments. The other thing is that you should include your essay prompt on the top of your essay so that we understand better what it really requires from you.
OP Lobocor 1 / 1  
Jul 17, 2014   #3
prompt

I am studying in ESL (English as second language) program. I forgot my title. But, just put "prompt" on the top? Okay! Thank you!


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