some hold the view that a
university is a
temple of knowledge
most students choose to
qualifications and capabilities,
for instancesuch as
, computer skills, presentation techniques, and
Certificates such as business, computer languages proficiency certificates are stronger weapons.
You wrote certificates such as...blank and blank certificates. Write either ...blank and blank or ...blank certificates and blank certificates
the one with language skills would more likely
the one with language skills
more likely to be employed
is no longer enough, and,
if they are to
in today's economy.
--anyone can compete but I think you are trying to make a point about success
theoretical knowledge coupled
with useful skills
they are what the
Wow, you've written really well!
Did I answer the question of the topic correctly?
It seems so. You provided a viewpoint and defended it
Are the examples I provide acceptable?
People go to school so they can succeed in the workforce was right on point--give the people what they came for
The competitiveness of the job market probably isn't as strong because you seem to suggest that an employer values a degree from a university...but that doesn't mean the university has to be experience oriented. I think you should clarify the idea that an employer looks for work-related experience gained in a university. That can really help =)