Hi Caroline, Dumi. These are my suggestion although your essay is probably the good argument.
I hope It could be useful for you :D
how to count and even the colors and shapes
How to count and identify the colors and shapes.
young kids use their hand to control the games as well they have to think how to win the game
young kids use their hands to control the games while still finding rapidly the way to defeat the other players.
For instance, some movies as well as video games taught kids to be tough and treat each other in bad ways
For instance, some movies as well as video games turned kid's attitude to be rough and violent toward another person easily.
Some children like to do the same thing that they saw in movies
Some children especially repeat many utopiian actions that they saw in the movies.