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IELTS ESSAY, how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste



pendar 6 / 12  
Sep 24, 2010   #1
Please tell me How can I upload picture and give your suggestions in my essay.
The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

You should write at least 150 words.

The link of charts:

ielts-blog/reports/ielts-academic-writing-task-1-pie-charts.gif

ielts-blog/reports/ielts-academic-writing-task-1-table-waste.gif

The three pie charts compare different forms of handling dangerous waste in three countries. The table shows how much weight of waste materials were produced in those countries in 2000.

According to the charts, the half of dangerous waste are buried in landfill dump in USA, while this method is the least popular forms of dealing with waste in Malaysia and UK, 30% and 15% respectively. The same and largest percentages of waste product are disposed in UK and Malaysia, 45%, but this way is applied only for 20% of product in America. Recycled is account for 25% in Malaysia, 20% in USA and 40% in UK.

The biggest producer of waste material was America in 2000. Plastic bags were the weightiest waste product, 60 million tons in USA and 50 million tons in Malaysia, in America followed by industrial chemical, 50 million tons. The least weight of waste product was generated in UK. Industrial chemicals, clinical and electronic waste nearly 10 million tons and 32 million tons of plastic bags.

Thanks

anhduy_tran 2 / 3  
Sep 24, 2010   #2
hi there !
I can not search the link of chart that you provide so i don't know whether data that you quote is correct or not. Moreover, in task 1 ,you should use simple past tense.

The same and largest percentage of waste product were disposed in UK and Malaysia, 45%, but this way was applied only for 20% of product in America. Recycled is accountaccounted for 25% in Malaysia, 20% in USA and 40% in UK.

your essay is fine.

good luck!


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