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Question:
The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table highlights the information on the total number of pupils in the United Kingdom who obtained qualifications for English Language Teachers in two academic years, 2007/8 and 2008/9 with specific focus on the number of male qualifiers. Overall, the total numbers of students remained the same at the period under review, but there was a significant difference between the numbers of male and female students who accomplished.
A closer looked to the table, there was a decrease total percentage of qualified male, approximately 2% a year later. Moreover, both of two test showed the decrease number which Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees showed a dramatic decline than TEFL, 17,3% to 12,1%. In addition, the number of male students who qualified with the TEFL was roughly three times the number who qualified with a Cambridge UCLES CELTA or other degrees.
In contrast, female showed the contrast view from male. In 2008/2009 it is revealed that there was a rise number in total and Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees. Even thought, in TEFL a decline is noted but, it fell in modest number, 14.
Question:
The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table highlights the information on the total number of pupils in the United Kingdom who obtained qualifications for English Language Teachers in two academic years, 2007/8 and 2008/9 with specific focus on the number of male qualifiers. Overall, the total numbers of students remained the same at the period under review, but there was a significant difference between the numbers of male and female students who accomplished.
A closer looked to the table, there was a decrease total percentage of qualified male, approximately 2% a year later. Moreover, both of two test showed the decrease number which Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees showed a dramatic decline than TEFL, 17,3% to 12,1%. In addition, the number of male students who qualified with the TEFL was roughly three times the number who qualified with a Cambridge UCLES CELTA or other degrees.
In contrast, female showed the contrast view from male. In 2008/2009 it is revealed that there was a rise number in total and Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees. Even thought, in TEFL a decline is noted but, it fell in modest number, 14.
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