IELTS SUMMARY MONTH; FIRST HEADLAMPS
Transportation is the one of crucial usable access in worldwide. There are numerous kind of public transportations are train,bus or similar of it.Specifically ,the progamable train progress is currently equipped by major firm .Time to time,for the past time up to now of example: in 1841 ,some trains used a oil lamp backed by curved reflector .So ,in 1841 ,the first electric headlamp was developed where it also being -increased rapidly
In beside of that,the train is able to be affordrable transportation and safier of big avenue of harmful accidental accident.To inhibit the myriad victims ,it equipped with a battery-powered electric headlamp
On several decades as we know that the train transportation is being developing significantly where the past time there was not a headlamp to be appeared headlamp .Subsequently, we will not predict the consecutive development of era that it would become what
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There are numerous kind of public transportationstransport such as are train,bus ...
Specifically ,the progamableprogrammable train progress is ...
Time to time,for the past time up to ...
... the train is able to be affordrableaffordable transportation and safier of ...
Hello bismillah. It's a nice writing but here is some advice for you. Hopefully it can improve your writing.
... kind of public transportations[,] [they] are train,bus or similar of it.
Time to[by] time,for the past time up to now ťťredundancy "time by time" has same meaning with the "for the past time to now"
of[for] example
Most of all, your punctuation should be pay more attention.
Keep writing! Best regard
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