please help with me with grammer and sentrence structure...im poor in this language
write an expository paragraph (a topic sentence, 3 supporting sentences with supporting details and a concluding sentence based on this topic:
My Leisure Activity
Many people prefer to spend their time with benefit things.The purpose is to fulfill the interest and their leisure time. We can use the Internet to find informations, participate in the forum and write blogs as our leisure time. Many people still prefer reading is a lack of interest in them. They assume that reading is boring because sitting quietly without doing other activities. But for me reading is fun. Because I get a lot of useful information.My inherit hobby, reading, provides me with the ability to insert such an interesting anecdote into the normal introduction. Likewise, reading itself is alluring. When a book is in my hand, I can soon immerse myself into another world, the palace of the ancient east, the elegance of universe, or the emotion of an emperor. Through volumes of books, intellects of great people have nourished my mind and changed my ways of thinking. This interest I practiced since the school until now. The reading material that I love are novels, magazines, cookery books, motivation books and religion books.My reading material are not limited to magazines and books only, but with the internet facilities nowadays I can read the online Internet such as websites, blogs, forums, ebooks and much more.The second activity that I always do in free time is cooking. I am loved cooking. From the recipe books that I have read, I will practice cooking skills by trying the new recipes. I will request family members to try out my new dishes and comment on the food. In this way I will improve my cooking skills otherwise they will make us more closer. The last activity I like to do with my family is travelling. I will do this activity during the long school holidays and if there are enough budgets.By travelling I will be able to see interesting places, learn about the culture and try the new food.The conclusion is many activities that we can do in our leisure time. It depends to us to use the opportunities in front of our eyes on the present advanced facilities.
write an expository paragraph (a topic sentence, 3 supporting sentences with supporting details and a concluding sentence based on this topic:
My Leisure Activity
Many people prefer to spend their time with benefit things.The purpose is to fulfill the interest and their leisure time. We can use the Internet to find informations, participate in the forum and write blogs as our leisure time. Many people still prefer reading is a lack of interest in them. They assume that reading is boring because sitting quietly without doing other activities. But for me reading is fun. Because I get a lot of useful information.My inherit hobby, reading, provides me with the ability to insert such an interesting anecdote into the normal introduction. Likewise, reading itself is alluring. When a book is in my hand, I can soon immerse myself into another world, the palace of the ancient east, the elegance of universe, or the emotion of an emperor. Through volumes of books, intellects of great people have nourished my mind and changed my ways of thinking. This interest I practiced since the school until now. The reading material that I love are novels, magazines, cookery books, motivation books and religion books.My reading material are not limited to magazines and books only, but with the internet facilities nowadays I can read the online Internet such as websites, blogs, forums, ebooks and much more.The second activity that I always do in free time is cooking. I am loved cooking. From the recipe books that I have read, I will practice cooking skills by trying the new recipes. I will request family members to try out my new dishes and comment on the food. In this way I will improve my cooking skills otherwise they will make us more closer. The last activity I like to do with my family is travelling. I will do this activity during the long school holidays and if there are enough budgets.By travelling I will be able to see interesting places, learn about the culture and try the new food.The conclusion is many activities that we can do in our leisure time. It depends to us to use the opportunities in front of our eyes on the present advanced facilities.
