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Truth is outrageous,nonacceptable & may hurts our belief; ISSUE TOPIC 1



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Apr 19, 2013   #1
note: please guide me for my discussion

"Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks upon the accepted wisdom of the time."

"Innumerable instances in past gives us pinch of reality", this statement itself a one of the best example of maxim that our ancestor uses in our daily conversation. there were so many proverbs which still we people following from our descendants , but one fine day somebody try to break them the society get hurted or thet thrown stone toward that person but as time passes people feel comfort with this fact but sometime it always quenh for the existance in real world, the author said that truth are outrageous at beginning and uncomfortable and it affects on our beliefs,I am completely agree with this.

In 15th century Nicolus copernicus stated that earth or solar system is basically round instead of flatbut some authorities refused to accept it thats why this fact is still facing so many contraversies.

In 19th century charles darwin stated that our ancestors or speies came from homosepian i.e theory of evolution but in this fact also there were so many contravertial things.

the great physicist galilio state that earth revolve around the earth and viseversa for this he had to pay cost.sometime truth is not itself truth and sometime it comes with so many liabalities so for them its quite difficult to prove it and some it becomes entrapped because of upper pressure.

so we can conclude that the truth is outrageous ,nonacceptable at its earlier stagesand it may hurts our beliefs

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Apr 19, 2013   #2
one of the best example

One of the best examples

thereTherewereare so many proverbstraditions and values which still we people are following from our descendants , but one fine day somebody try to break them the society get hurtedhurt or thet thrown stone towards that person but as time passes people feel comfort with this fact but sometime it always quenh for the existance in real world, the author said that truth are outrageous at beginning and uncomfortable and it affects on our beliefs,I am completely agree with this.

.... this line is too long and therefore does not flow smoothly... Shorten the sentence.
people are following/ people follow
Also, I guess what you mean is that cultural values, traditions and concepts that are carried forward from generation to generation unquestioned... aren't they?

,I am completely agree with this.

.... I agree/ I am agreeing ... it's better to use " I agree"
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Apr 20, 2013   #3
thanx sir i will correct my mistake


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