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Tuition's hike shouldn't be implemented in some state universities.



niesaysi 16 / 281  
Feb 20, 2011   #1
Low of tuition! That is what some of the students appeal on the CHED or Commission on Higher Education. In place of Manila, or other cities, many students conducted rallies in order to shout their feelings upon hiking of the tuition in some state universities. They believe it is a big factor that affect their studies. If it gonna be implemented, probably, students will continue to appeal, do illegal action, and the most worse is, the stop of studying. It is sought that our country suffers from poverty.In that case, students choose the state universities for it is affordable enough to acquire higher education. And also giving them an opportunities to reach their dreams and to move on from being poor. But how they will attain if the government contradict the chances of obtaining it? Education is ought for the students willing to take it on. So, government officials must lessen increasing of tuition because they just depriving them a prerogative to educate themselves. Funds should give to the schools with adequate amount in aimed to fulfill the necessary needs of an institutions. If that is could be, no need to hike tuition fees. Better than that, students will continue striving and they will offer endeavors not only with their families but, of course,to the government who subsidize them. But graft and corruption still cannot be evaded. Government schools will definitely affect much. We all know that our country is one of the most corrupt nation. Corruption is one of the reason why some state universities experience high amount of tuition fees. The government will give the school inadequate funds to be used for educational materials. Because of it, the administrators of the school might insist to increase tuition. Union of the students happen when it is officially decided to implement. We can able to see their determination, perseverance, and sacrifice just only to get good education. If the government will not appreciate all their hardships, that maybe shows of obstructing the desires of every students. Proper education may not count how an institution implements high tuition but how to impart ideas and wisdom to the students.

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sidd777 1 / 5  
Feb 20, 2011   #2
They believe it is a big factor that affects their studies
And also giving them an opportunity

many students conducted rallies to shout their feelings upon hiking of the tuition in some state universities.

And alsoMoreover giving them an opportunities to reach their dreams and to move on from being poor.

Corruption is one of the reason why some state universities experience high amount of tuition fees.

Funds should give to the schools with adequate amount in aimed to fulfill the necessary needs of an institution

Good luck!
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EF_Susan - / 2310  
Feb 27, 2011   #3
I'm not sure what the beginning of this is supposed to say...
Low of tuition! Should it say ...
Lower tuition!
or
Low tuition!

If it gonna not a real word.
If it is going to be implemented, probably students will continue to appeal, do illegal action, and the worst is that they stop studying.
Practice typing this sentence this way.

It is sought ?? that our country suffers from poverty.

... if the government limits the chances of obtaining it?

Education is ought for the students willing to take it on. ---Here is another one that I am not sure how to fix. Maybe... Education is the right of every student willing to take it on.

So, government officials must lessen increasing of avoid increasing tuition, because...

:-) I hope that helps!


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