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The two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes

alif 12 / 13 2  
May 7, 2015   #1
The diagram illustrates the different method used for collecting water for irrigation. Overall, it can be seen that the both Swing Basket and Bucket have diverse features to run water for irrigation farmland.

The first method is swing basket that consists of ropes used to attract the basket from well with 1up to 2 metres, then there are robe and bucket made of bamboo or leather. Firstly, the basket is filled with water which is helped by two people, and then it is poured to an irrigation channel to farmer lands.

Although this process is unlike swing basket, roping bucket is more difficult than usually we did. In this the method, we can see that there are some tools used to take water in the hole such as; a bucket, rollers, ropes, exactly at least two people to make it easier. Furthermore, cow starts to walk up to the hill, the bucket fall down approximately 50 meters deep. That bucket is filled with water, and then buffalo brings the water to the place farmland.

Anfalia 40 / 56 23  
May 7, 2015   #2
let me try to give you an overview;
Overall, the are several different steps in both swing basket, and rope and bucket methods provided in the process of water-collecting for irrigation. While people as the media of swing basket who collect water from reservoir to the irrigation channel, the method of rope and bucket uses animal as the main media to pull the collective water from well to this channel.

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eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
May 10, 2015   #3
Like writing task 2, the first paragraph in writing task 1 is the starting point to introduce the whole report. For this, you write well. However, you'd better try not to write your intro as close as the topic given. What I mean here is that you have to vary the words and sentences. Let's give a try

These pictures compare how people conduct water irrigation with different process. A brief look at the process reveals that a few traditional tools used virtually bear a striking resemblance to one another. In any case, taking account of some different steps to accomplish the task is a must.

Thanks, eddy suaib.

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