IELTS WRITING: Undereducated people

World's illiteracy numbers in 2000

Can you help me check grammatical mistakes, give me advice and the overall? Thanks in advance.
Part 1:
The chart illustrates the percentage of people who are uneducated by every area of the world and by each gender in 2000. It is evident that South Asia has the highest illiteracy rates in both men and women in this year, opposed to the developed countries.

As can be seen on the chart, South Asia has a giant number of untutored people, whose men and women account for almost 55%, 32% respectively in the illiteracy level. It was followed by Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa. Even though the number of uneducated women in Arab States overtakes Sub-Saharan Africa by about 3%, Sub-Saharan Africa exceeds Arab States by almost 1% in the number of illiterate men. East Asia and Latin America do not undergo any dramatic differences, ranging from 5% to 15%, excluding the figure by women in East Asia. Finally, Developed Countries are at its minimum, whose figures in male and female reach the lowest point.

One at a time.

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  Task 1
  

Hi, this seems pretty good to me. You've already broke down the most important points of the chart. Good luck!

This isn't just a chart. It is a bar chart. Be specific about the type of image you see because every chart has a type. Bar, column, line graph, etc. The identity of the chart adds to your TA accuracy score as this is a required element of the summary overview. You need to list the countries as a part of the information recap. Again, this is because the countries indicated will allow the examiner to know what area of the world the measurements pertain to. The image does not indicate that the measurement is done by percentage.

Do not make any assumptions regarding the information presented in the chart. It could misinform the reader. Instead, define the measurement as simply, a rate, standard, or comparison point. That section of the paragraph is the perfect spot for you to utilize your synonym knowledge and increase your LR score in the process.

Learn when to start a new paragraph. The Task 1 essay has a minimum 3 paragraph requirement. This allows you to perfect show off your writing skills. Aim to write 175 words as 156 words are not enough to highlight your true English writing abilities. Just don't write more than 190 words in the process.