I will look at the reasoning of both camps
There is no need to repeat the discussion instructions. This was already established in the prompt restatement. Only your personal opinion presentation is needed at this point. This should be a 2 sentence direct representation of the original. However, this presentation is still acceptable and will be awarded points. It is good enough, but could have been better. # Median score
This word does not exist in the English language. Perhaps you meant to say "Vice-versa" meaning in reverse order from the way something has been stated; the other way around ? Regardless, the first word does not exist and the word suggestion would have been an improperly used word. Score markdown #1.
Secondly, in fact, an official state has more problems which are
What? The presentation is incomplete. There is no logic or coherence present. Score markdown #2.
Where is the personal opinion paragraph? The 3rd reasoning presentation. That cannot be used as a concluding statement. Score markdown #3.
There is no closing paragraph. The writer will lose more points. There are severe deductions that will adversely affect the score.