Essay on being unique - Everybody is unique in their own way.

essay on being unique 1 paragraph long

Everybody is unique in their own way. I think I am unique because of several reasons a few things about me; I love ranches and horses and have loved horses for as long as I can remember. My family and I grew up on a 20 acre ranch in Bonita that has been in my family for four generations. My ranch currently holds about one hundred horses, donkeys, cows, bulls, chickens and other livestock. I also have a love for cars and the automotive industry and almost every aspect of it. I love racing, and have been working in the automotive field for the past 15 years and am currently 3 classes away from getting my associates of science degree which I will be graduating with honors. I am also the world's greatest husband to the love of my life and the greatest father to 2 young boys. Glen my oldest son is 2 and my youngest son James is 9 months old.

Ronnie, don't say "I think I am unique". In these sorts of statements, you need to present an air of confidence and ability. So say "I am unique because..." Being unique should not be something that you think about, it should just be something that you are. The narrative that you wrote does not really explain any unique aspect of your personality or traits, which is what the normal response to this essay is. What you gave instead is a description of who you are, where you live, and what you are in life. Not exactly the description of what sets you apart, or makes you unique when compared to everyone else. I suggest that you do some soul searching before you revise your response. Try to think of reasons that you feel different from everyone else in a special way, maybe it is the way you treat other people, or the way you care for your family, maybe it is because you are the only person who can understand the way you think. Whatever the reason, it needs to make you stand out from the crowd. Be different. Find that difference in your personality and build it up in a manner that makes you seem unique from everyone else :-)

Wow, you are a very unique individual, and this essay has a lot of ideas. I want to know more about the ranch your family owns - tell me about a summer there, what you learned from it, inspiration... maybe the first time you took the horse out for a ride? Tie that in with your family, how your sons grew a love for the outdoors as well. At the end, say how all of these things have given you the energy to continue your education. I personally think it is amazing that you are able to do so, with a family. You mention you were part of the automotive field for the past 15 years - what did that teach? How do your coworkers look at you when they hear you are back in school? Do they even know? What prompted you to continue your education in the first place? Best of luck!

this essay has alot of great ideas just try avoiding the part where you say because although it shows great confidence it shows a bit arrogance to and you dont want that