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'Why don't we use laughing gas in wars?'



Ravi Vj 2 / 5  
Nov 24, 2013   #1
War? Why ...
God made the country and man made the town! Isn't it true?
The world has changed drastically after the entry of man in the scene.He has changed almost everything that came to range.After all he proved to be the greatest and most smartest of all the walking creatures.Love,Hate,Greed all were his qualities.These led to the start of 'snatching' business,a new phenomenon in the society.Greed was after all a driving factor behind it.So war became his trend.War for his country,his land,his belongings and so on began ruthlessly.To look strong,to own more prosperity,to progress man needed capturing and for this war became essential.

'But do you think war was a right option?'

War has caused the tremendous destruction of land and lives.Royalties just to show their powers have sacrificed many men and women and the result was just the destruction of the state.Many other consequences of war were also seen over the ages.So why War??

It's Ok!
Lets settle on war but can't we have a war with very less destruction and or the destruction is completely finished.Just think of it.It would be so wonderful if happened such.

I have an idea.Instead of using weapons or the materials of mass destruction why not use the laughing gas(the chemical name of laughing gas is nitrous oxide(just for info.))? HAHA .It may sound silly or I may look fanatic in front of you,but just imagine if laughing gas would have been used in the wars what would have been the scene?

America attacking Japan by a capsule of laughing gas instead of an atom bomb and those destroyed cities and the dead people would have been laughing,alive and long-lived.Imagine if a riot broke and people are given a dose of laughing gas instead of gun fires.Many examples can be found in the history where the war could have been stopped and the civilizations could have been saved.Just think of it.!

Now though past can't be changed,we have our presents and futures which can be furnished.
There is nothing worth gaining in these wars.Just destruction and destruction and only destruction.
Please why don't you think that the world is in need of some proper care and get rid of stresses the society is rendering upon it.There is already many reasons to cry and people living unhappy.Lets have a handful of laughter which can make you people healthier.

So its my suggestion to all the governments or citizens either don't fight or use laughing gas in your fights so that the world become happy and a very beautiful place to live in...

Please try once!!

dumi 1 / 6793  
Nov 27, 2013   #2
God made the country and man made the town! Isn't it true?

God created the world and the man made the town! Isn't it true?

He has changed almost everything that came to range.

He had changed almost everything that he had his eyes set on.

most smartest

... there is redundancy

These led to the startbeginning of 'snatching' business,a new phenomenon in the society.

These led to the start of 'snatching' business,a new phenomenon in the society.Greed was after all a driving factor behind it.So war became his trend.War for his country,his land,his belongings and so on began ruthlessly.

Greed began to drive the man and war became an inevitable outcome of it.
OP Ravi Vj 2 / 5  
Nov 27, 2013   #3
Sir thank you very much for some real grammar check.I believe these valuable suggestions of yours would help improve my writings....Stay tuned for more thrilling and satirical essays....


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