Tonynhan /
Aug 14, 2023 #1
The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries.
My answer:
The table gives information about the amount of water used for three different sectors in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, New Zealand, and Canada.
Overall, in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, the vast majority of water is used for agriculture. In addition, among the four countries, the domestic and industrial sectors consume the highest amount of water in Canada.
As can be seen from the table, in Canda, 20% of water is used for the domestic sector. By contrast, in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, domestic water uses consume 8% and 6% of the total amount of water, respectively. Regarding industry, the amounts of water used in four countries account for 10% (Egypt), 30% (Saudi Arabia), 46% (New Zealand), and 70% (Canada).
According to the table, in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, the vast majority of water is used for agriculture, taking up 82% and 64%, respectively. However, in Canada, the agricultural sector consumes only a small amount of water, representing 10%.
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