Nowadays, it is quite common for young people in many countries who are encouraged to stop their studies for a year after finishing high school.
.... not grammatically incorrect. However, it sounds a bit crowded with too many words;
Nowadays, the gap year is a very common trend that students use to travel or work for one year after finishing high school.Although the trend gives students useful choices whether they desire to travel or get a job, negative sides obviously exist.
.... this sounds too close to what the prompt suggests. You better present the same idea differently;
Although this trend gives students useful choices, it has a negative side too.