TED Video 3: Reduce Pancreatic Cancer Diseases

Pancreas cancer is disease which make many people died. The result of survey in 2016 obtained, that pancreatic cancer is the third high rate to make people died. The other survey found the percentage of people who can survive with cancer disease shows tiny percentage at 8% than breast cancer at 89%. Also, the average of died caused pancreatic cancer has not difference as long as 49 years ago.

Many doctors establish pancreatic cancer treatment to be more effective. But, they didn't find positive solution for it. Many doctors give pancreatic cancer treatment by chemotherapy, it is routine treatment that same approach for the breast cancer. But, that treatment has a few progress to stop pancreatic cancer growth. Because, pancreatic cancer in the middle vital organs such us stomach, liver, and bile duck. Also, drugs injected in the vain to navigate in our body, until the tumor center. However, navigate drugs by bloods so limited reduce pancreatic cancer system.

New treatment was establish by collaboration clinical center in Boston found the pancreatic cancer can be effective by localize it with the panther matrix. The panther matrix is a drug that flexible to implant directly by the doctor. Pre-clinical study obtained the panther matrix reduce the systemic toxic effect of body.

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1st paragraph:
- PancreasPancreatic cancer is a disease which make many people died.that kills many people.
- The result of a survey in 2016 by ....... obtained,has resulted that pancreatic cancers is the third high rate to make people died.of all types were the seventh most common cause of cancer deaths, resulting in 330,000 deaths globally.

- The other surveys have found that the percentage of people who can survive withfrom cancer disease showshas showed tiny percentage at 8% than breast cancer at 89%.

- Also, the average of dieddeath caused by pancreatic cancer has notdid not have significant difference as long asthan 49 years ago.

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