IELTS: BOTH VIEW - Some people say that there is no need to go the Cinema

movie theaters - needed or not?

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones and tablets and there is no need to go the Cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films needs to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some different opinions among people as to it is necessary to go to a movie theater to enjoy the film. As nowadays we can easily watch movies on our electronic device at home, I personally believe that there is no need to travel to cinema to watching movies.

It is understandable why some people think it is essential to go to a movie theater. The main reason is that movie theaters offer great sound effect and big screen which you hardly accessed to in our home. With high quality of sound and screen, you can easily immersed in the vibe of the film. For example, when you watching action movie like Kung Fu, those high technology machines and sound systems around you makes you feel like you are in the movie and makes you feel more thrilling. Moreover, the latest movies only released in cinema, if you want to watch the same movie at home, you might need to wait like over two months after it out of theaters.

Despite the arguments mentioned above, I believe that there are more enjoyable if you watch movies at home. Firstly, you have more options when you look up films online. If you have a membership of Netflix, you can easily watch any genre of movies as you like while movie theaters only offer limited options. Secondly, home is always more private and cleaner than public space. With where you used to, you can be more relax and less distractions when you enjoy films. Finally, the choice of not go to the cinema will be a money saver, which means you feel less pressure with this entertainment.

In conclusion, although some people opine that it is essential to go to a movie theater because they can enjoy the newest movie with better services, I believe that it is no necessary to travel to cinema and pay for watching. Enjoy the film you interested in your comfortable own place will be more economic and fun.

You may want to reconsider your word count for the Task 2 essay. As you are required to proof read and clean up your presentation, you should scale back your writing. Producing a discusussion covering 275-290 words will suffice. If your English language writing skills are good, you should be able to clearly explain everything within 3-5 sentences. You don't need to over discuss. Rather, you should provide a target discussion per reasoning paragraph starting with your topic sentence.

This is a 3 paragraph essay. 2 of which should be based on an explanation of a public opinion based on the reference in the original prompt to "some people" and "others". Those terms represent a public point of view that requires individual paragraph discussions based on the related reasons. Your personal opinion comes after and should be based upon support for one of the two public points of view. You are not to present a personal opinion immediately This is the basic format for this discussion. There is a more advanced way of writing it but I believe you are not yet ready to use that format at this point. So I will not suggest it.

Do not use too many reasons in your paragraphs. One or two connected discussion points will suffice. At this point, your essay has an over presentation of reasons. Reasons that are not fully explained and developed in each paragraph. Simply delivering reasons, without proper explanations and examples, does not create a clear and coherent presentation on your part.