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The wares on which consumer spends in five countries, located in Europe in 2002.



IvanMS027 43 / 28  
Nov 8, 2016   #1
The table above gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


The table informs the goods on which consumer spend in five countries which located in Europe in 2002. Overall, the most obvious fact is the most of food, drink, and tobacco were sold in Turkey, meanwhile most of clothing and footwear were sold in Italy. However, leisure and education were the smallest items were sold.

For food, drink, and tobacco, most of those were sold in Turkey and Ireland with 32.14 percent and 28.91 percent respectively. The percentage of the goods sold in Spain and Italy was 18.80 percent and 16.36 percent meanwhile Sweden was the least consumer of the goods with 15.77 percent.

Clothing and footwear were the loads that had a significant decreasing gap with the previous mentioned goods, having no more than nine percent. The percentage of the freight bought by Ireland, Spain and Turkey was just above 6 percent meanwhile Sweden was 5.4 percent. The other items were leisure and education. Turkey spent 4.23 percent while Italy and Sweden had the same number approximately at 3 percent. Spain spent the least number on it with only spending 1.98 percent.

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Any corrections and suggestions will be appreciated.


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Beauty17 56 / 79  
Nov 8, 2016   #2
Hallo here my suggestio for you..

... the goods on which consumer spend in five countries whichare located in ...
..., meanwhile the most of clothing ...
... smallest items were sold in those countries .

The percentage of the goods(what type of goods?? ) sold in Spain (...) was the least consumer of the goodsof those items with 15.77 percent. (repetitive goods)

... Spain and Turkey was just above 6 percent meanwhile Sweden was 5.4 percent. The other items ...(Be careful, it almost shopping list)

good luck
nda18 46 / 60  
Nov 10, 2016   #3
Hi Mr Ivan, Here are my correction

1. ... goods on which consumer spend in five countries ...
[ i think it is not about the goods but the money that consumer spent on goods ]
2. The percentage of the goods sold in Spain and Italy
[ it would better if you explain what the goods are ]
3. Clothing and footwear were the loads (...) no more than nine percent.
[ you should mention in which country/countries ]

suggestion :
it would be better if you not write it like a shopping list.
goodluck


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