IELTS 1: How much waste was collected by a recycling centre over a period of 5 consecutive years

waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015

A glance at the chart provided reveals how much waste was collected by a recycling centre over a period of 5 consecutive years between 2011 and 2015

Overall , It is evident that the total amount of waste collected only fluctuated slightly throughout the period . Furthermore , paper was the most collected type of recyclable waste , the opposite was true for garden waste .

In 2011 , the figure for paper waste was approximately under 60 tons , whereas the garden waste was just over 32 tons . Meanwhile , there was about 48 tons of glass was gathered which was higher roughly 13 tons in comparison with the amount of tins waste .

The period from 2011 to 2013 witnessed a moderate decline in the amount of paper wasted which made this figure hit the lowest point of 40 tons , then rising rapidly to 70 tons in the year 2015 . During the same time , the figure of other waste fluctuated marginal , then stood at over 50 tons of glass , approximately 40 tons of tins and 35 tons of garden waste .

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There should not be a space between the last word and punctuation mack in the sentences either. This is a simple formatting problem that you should have learned about when writing school reports and essays.

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