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The weekly expenditure of fast food on 3 categories in the UK in the period from 1970 to 1990


Trinhdieuhong 1 / -  
Sep 26, 2020   #1

the consumption of fast food in the UK



The given line graph illustrates the weekly expenditure of fast food on 3 categories in the UK in the period from 1970 to 1990
It can be clearly seen that fish is likely to be the most popular food consumpted in the UK. In addition, there is an upward trend in the number of fish & chips and pizza expenditure, compared to a downward trend in the figure of hamburger spending during the research period.

The first striking feature observed from the graph is that the number of pizza eaten was by far highest in the UK, at more than 300 grams in 1970. By contrast,the figure for hamburger was significantly lower,at around 30 grams. Additionally, approximately 80 grams of fish&chips were eaten by UK citizens In the same year. Interestingly,the year 1982 witnessed an equal quantity in the fish&chips and pizza consumption, at about 200 grams

When it comes to 1990, fish&chips weekly consumption increased dramatically to 500 grams whereas hamburger's figure rose slightly to 300 grams. At the same time, the number of pizza spending is likely to remain stable at roughly 200 grams
todoroki 2 / 6  
Sep 26, 2020   #2
You should attach the line graph so that others can help you. I did this topic before and as a learner, I can give you some advice.

First, you need to name what kinds of fast food is mentioned in the line graph, something like this: "expenditure of three particular kinds of fast food, which are hamburger, fish and chips, and pizza".

"Fish is likely to be the most...". I think "likely" and words related to probability should not be used in Task 1. Furthermore, you should write "fish and chips", not "fish"

You should avoid words expressing your emotions like "surprisingly", "interestingly"
I hope other admins can give you more helpful review.


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