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IELTS TASK 1: The winter heating costs according to heating fuel type



Eva Novita Sari 47 / 67  
Apr 23, 2014   #1
The graph shows the winter heating costs according to heating fuel type from 2003 to 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
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Answer:

The graphs illustrate the winter heating costs for consumers age 65+ by heating fuel type from 2003 to 2011.

Generally, it can be seen that prize heating fuel type in winter seasons from 2003-2010.

Type of heating fuel was consists of electricity, natural gas and fuel oil. The first of all, prize of electricity in 2003-04 was approximately $343, and in increased slightly among $340 in 2004-05. Then, it climbed even higher respectively until approximately $460 in 2010-11 in winter seasons. The second of all, prize of natural gas in 2003-04 was approximately $627 that reached a new peak in 2005-06 among $897, and it decreased slightly in 2006-07 approximately $775. Then, it increased again, but it began to fall sharply in 2009-10 among $554. This was then undergone remained reasonably from 2009-10 until 2010-11.

The lastly, prize of fuel oil undergone increasing steadily from $928 in 2003-04 until $1.466 in 2005-06, and it happened saturation between in 2005 and 2006. However, it began to be climbed sharply in 2007-08 with prize approximately $ 2.031, but it decreased slightly again just among $1.967. Then, it increased sharply in 2010-11 approximately $2.425.

To sum up, prize of heating fuel type was expensive than electricity and natural gas.


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dumi 1 / 6793  
Apr 23, 2014   #2
The graphs illustrate the winter heating costs for consumers age 65+ by heating fuel type from 2003 to 2011.

Good intro :)

Generally, it can be seen that prize heating fuel type in winter seasons from 2003-2010.

This overview needs lots of improvement as it does not provide any substantial idea about the graph to the reader.
Overall, all three fuel types have shown an increase in their usage through out the period while fuel oil has been the most used and electricity been the least used fuel type.

Type of heating fuel was consists of electricity, natural gas and fuel oil.

wrong grammar;
fuel consisted / fuel was consisting of ... Past tense
fuel consists / fuel is consisting ... Present tense
BOMAT_IRA 29 / 39  
Apr 23, 2014   #3
Type of heating fuel was consists of electricity, natural gas and fuel oil.

use past tense, miss..:)
Pahan 1 / 1824  
Apr 23, 2014   #4
To sum up, prize of heating fuel type was expensive than electricity and natural gas.

You don't need to have a conclusion for this task.


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