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Have you ever wondered what that "Organically grown" sticker actually means when you have seen signs



Khusel 3 / 3  
Sep 24, 2014   #1
today,i read some interesting passage on internet.This passage's title is Have you ever wondered what that "Organically grown" sticker actually means ? Then,i am writing that what i understood from this passage.i hope that you are check it that organization of below sentences

Well,Organically grown is bugs,i know it sound Ghostly,because Predatory insects have been used in agriculture for at least 1700 years.They-Chinese who used this way first-used yellow ants to control caterpillers and other pests in their own agriculture.this way is disappeared for short time because of the some reason (this is my mind)

but today,all of the people are requiring Organic vegetables and products.so the farmers have brought the bugs back to meet demand of people and control their pants and vegetables instead the chemical pesticide.

Finally,if the farmers would use predatory insects-such as yellow citrus ants,ladybugs and a lacewing larva etc...-to protect their own farms from some troublesome insect instead chemical pesticide.Their products are Organically grown product

vangiespen - / 4077  
Sep 25, 2014   #2
Khusel, while I commend your for your effort to practice your reading comprehension skills on your own, I cannot properly gauge what you understood of the article because you did not provide us with a copy of it. Kindly provide it so that we can get a better idea of what to look for in your writing. You can either cut and paste it here directly or give us the non-hyperlinked url as a source.

Your paper is flawed in many ways. Capitalization issues abound and improper use of terms are just some of the problems plaguing your paper. I strongly recommend that you revise the paper and make sure that it delivers the necessary elements of a comprehension paper. That includes a short summary of the content and important information along with your understanding of the topic being reported.

Just a word of advice, Ghostly, means supernatural spirits, Ghastly, means something horrific or offensive. I am sure you did not mean to use Ghostly in that sentence, neither did you mean to capitalize its use in the middle of a sentence :-) Also, "but" is never used to open a sentence. In addition, a new sentence or paragraph always begins with a capital letter for the first word.
OP Khusel 3 / 3  
Sep 25, 2014   #3
Thank you so much for your advise.This was my first time to write my opinion in here.So i know that it was so Bad.i will write better than previous one next time.I hope that you would check it out again.Finally Thank you so much for your valuable advice. :D


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