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"The words like Justice only exist in dictionaries"; Rich men have no fault



kingmaker 1 / -  
May 25, 2013   #1
We all came in world with labels of rich and poor on our head. Some were bestowed with titles, while some with curse of poverty. Perhaps along with genes that we inherit from parents the life we going to lead is also inherited.

The words like Justice only exist in dictionaries made for poor where they have to be cautious about the right path and be afraid of committing any sin. The rich and well off don't have to worried for his actions, his money is good antiseptic for his bad deeds. In case of any inhumane act from a rich man, no one will complain at first cause of his wealth and status, but even if someone stand against the evil and talks for punishing the guilty, his mouth will be banded and lesson will be taught to him that "Rich men has no fault".

The relation between rich and poor is like a game that poor always loses. The so called friendly relations between countries like US and Pakistan is a clear example for us. No matter what US does in Pakistan, the former always have to bow his head and give friendly gestures. Killing common people in the land of Pakistan is not a fault of US anymore. The status of US is sufficient to remove the sorrows of his FRIEND.

This inequality is not a new concept it came down on earth along with Humans. The son of Adam when killed his brother due to his might, wasn't afraid of accountability and all he cared was to bury the body and remove the evidence.

We are living in an unfair world where there are no rules for Rich and Powerful. And this is perhaps destiny of rich to be above law.

dumi 1 / 6793  
May 25, 2013   #2
We all came in world with labels of rich and poor on our head.

... very interesting idea :D
We all live in this world with labels such as "Rich" and "Poor" pasted on us.

Perhaps along with genes that we inherit from parents the life we going to lead is also inherited.

.... this is not very clearly expressed. Better rephrase.

The words like Justice only exist in dictionaries (stop here) made for poor where they have to be cautious about the right path and be afraid of committing any sin.

The words like "Justice" only exist in dictionaries. The poor people should be cautious about doing wrong because the law applies to them strictly.

The rich and well off don't have to be worried for histheir actions, hisbecause money is a good antiseptic for hiscover their bad deeds.

.... the "rich" and "poor" generally refer to a collection of people (plural_


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