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The world will become a very scary place if we lose our listening skills



Dioba 68 / 97  
Sep 22, 2016   #1
Listening is one of the parts of communication. In general, almost people spend their time in communication for listening. Listening is the process making meaning from sound, process of extraction and essence. In other situation, listening have a patterns which is we can recognize, like someone in party situation. Culture, language, values and attitudes categorized as the filters from all noisy sound. So people recognize patterns to distinguish noise from signal. Listening is the access to understanding each other.Unfortunately, people retain just 25 percent of what they hear. This means that people becoming desensitized and it is becoming problem. When media using some kind of words like shock, scandal and sensation as their headline to get our attention.It is harder for us to pay attention. This is become serious problem if we losing our listening. The consequences is the world become very scary place.

Fatirtalent 12 / 17  
Sep 22, 2016   #2
Dear Dio
you've done your writing well, but here some comments of mine. Hope, it would be useful.

This is become ing serious problem if we are losing our listening.
... the world becomes very scary place.

a. "is" and "become" are verb. you cannot put them together. you could kindly choose one of them or change become as noun form "becoming"

b. are, you need verb over there.
c. don't forget to put "s" if the subject is he/she/it


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